On the twelve of June we read snow white. Then we had to write a letter to her as advice
I chose to be her dad, hope you like it.
I chose to be her dad, hope you like it.
Hi snow white it’s me your father I just want to say something's about your book, why did you walk into a stranger's house? without them knowing and why did you talk to strangers. You know me and your mother taught you better than this you should know better. Why did you eat the strangers poison apple and When you fell down I was shattered so well the stranger was running I struck lightning at the edge of the cliff so she could fall down . Me and your mother just miss you, that's why we are writing this letter to you. Why did you go with that prince, he just came and kissed you without you knowing and if he hurts my little girl I’ll come down there and haunt him, forever. Here's some advice don't talk to strangers, don't eat what ever a stranger provides and be safe. That’s all I wanted to say, we wish you the best in all your life with your prince and remember what I said,goodbye now, we love you.
From: Dad.
Antonio that was really good story from snow white dad
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